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romance

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Caressing my hips those hands, I can’t forget

My lips, so moist to the sound of his voice

The love I crave inside is creeping up my thighs

Reminiscing thoughts as i indulge in his stride.

Sudden anticipation, lust takes over, tears began to fall,

This can’t be real; my body gives in, my mind screams, NO

Only if I could wait, see were this goes, what future does this hold

Only passion. Love I seek, your kiss I’m weak.

A closer look, reading in between intertwined lines, of lies adjusted by sound ,enlightened by sun, surrounded by darkness,

Caressing my hips those hands I can’t forget

my lips, So moist to the sound of your voice.

Immersed into love, I submit to  passion, but yet only

Mentally,  physically I am absent.

Reminiscing,  Randomly.

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prettygirl23 says:

Wow! This is a great poem. Keep writing!

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Kavindra says:

I like the way you wrote this I love that it is open for the reader to make their own interpretations
 

RonnieL says:

One word for me....erotic!

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WarriorCarryingWater says:

Nice!

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