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HymnAgen
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lightness in the dark
Pen wouldn't move til now Current eventz got me feelin some kinda way

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Sparkling Wine

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romance

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With a smile

you pop my cork

permitting

effervescent thoughts

to fill your

champagne fluted ears.

Fermented words

I aged for years

to near perfection

for this moment

in your presence

to express them.

Sip…

Feel the sensation

of tingling

upon your lips –

like carbonation –

when we kiss –

like testing 9-volts

with the tips

of probing tongues.

I have been waiting

for this

like my empty lungs

inhaling greedily

the oxygen availed

surfacing from

the ocean’s depths.

Since the day

you and I met

so long ago,

that day your voice

smiled at me

replying, “Hi,”

to my, “Hello”

and introduction.

Could you sense

my flavor complex

even then?

See the refinement

of the wild vines I tamed

to yield this blend?

Though you showed

interest in this vintage

I had to deny your buds.

My flavors as yet

undeveloped

would have led to

to tainted love.

Now that my bouquet

is exquisite

and your palette

has matured,

allow me to

intoxicate you

with a love

that shall endure….

 

- HymnAgen

 

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twistedbeauty says:

love this.

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Poetunleashed says:

Wow
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corey says:

I thoroughly enjoyed the sip of your verbiage! It was smooth and sweet! Fantastically, well done!

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DallasCowgirl says:

Brother.. in all seriousness, I need to know... WHERE ON EARTH DO YOU PURCHASE YOUR PENS FROM? I'm serious. This piece is dope. All of your pieces are dope. I really need to know where you buy your pens from. I need a couple, man. Just one will suffice. (keep writing)

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hymnagen says:

twistedbeauty, thank you for saying so

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hymnagen says:

Poetunleashed #humbled

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hymnagen says:

corey, I'm glad you enjoyed the read. Thanks for riding with me.

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hymnagen says:

Sis, your pens work just fine. I'm still dippin quills ol kool style. j/k 'Preciate you, and your unwavering support #Respect

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Tali says:

So beautiful and elegant
 

alekia abeni says:

I held my breath til the end. As always..... Beautifully penned

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hymnagen says:

Elegant...I like that. Thank you, Tali_sosweet

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hymnagen says:

alekia abeni, wow! Humbled by your remarks. Thanks!
 

Woven says:

Wow... Vibrant imagery, from beginning to end. Exquisite!

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2b2b2 says:

AWESOME, lady killin', quaking dedication.....ya killed it brah!! BRAVO!!
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hymnagen says:

Woven, I really appreciate your feedback. thanks for reading!
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hymnagen says:

I see you, 2b. Thanks for checking it out, brotha. Peace

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love_supreme says:

Man, you keep flowin!. Excellent write.

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hymnagen says:

One of my recent favs. Glad you enjoyed it latin_lover

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LP45 says:

Love the word play. This is an awesome write. Thank you for sharing this.
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hymnagen says:

And thank you for your feedback Ladypoet45

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love_supreme says:

I had to reread this one. Excellent write.

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