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sjluke
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Margins

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life

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Edge of sentinmental

after the line has been

crossed, waiting to see

the results like a

contestant in life's

race, burned by

ignorance, hoping

for brilliance, lights

out, throwing shade

on dreams, the edge

is now blurred by

bitter tears, fitting

in isn't fitting, but it's

all that matters to you

 

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COMMENTS

 

social seer says:

conformist conforming down on the downward slope?
 

Woven says:

And in the end, greatness doesn't care to fit in, it just is. Wonderful word play and message.

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