Let me talk about my tears . In particular they fall because of my fears . I went to church and cried for the first time .The preachers words entered my ears and all I could think about is what became one of my fears . I'm a senior in high school completing my last year . For so long I've been steered in the right direction trying to accomplish goals that will give my life a good complexion . My family cheered when I got my acceptance letter . College is next for me ,but for the life in me I can't find enough fight in me to win against calculus . So in this write I ask for all you good people to please keep me in your prayers to pass my math class . Nothing more scares me then the thought of not graduating . My father told me ," you've came too far to give up. Keep your head up and pull your grade back up ."Baby girl dust off , stand up , and try again . You can not let this calculus win ! -Quanna.H
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The Immortal Wize says: Ah, Bravo!!! This poem has me smiling from ear to ear. Very inspiring. |
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Shortiiie_q says: Thank you so much 😊 |
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RonnieL says: LOL...Hated math! Nice! |
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Shortiiie_q says: @RonnieL ....yes lol math had really made the last months of high school depressing for me , but i pulled through it . lol nd thanks |
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SMusinga says: Awwww... you just have a way with words. This poem actually made me smile. It's just a great feeling altogether and the way you described it made it even better. |
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Shortiiie_q says: @yuhi , thank you very much. Your words mean alot to me ....and.for everyone who took the time to read my poem....thank you very much .. And for the prayers lol .. I did pass math and i graduated ..Next is savannah state university. . thank you once again ! |
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Coalhouse says: I cry all the time at church! |
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