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The Immortal Wize

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lightness in the dark
If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

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Rather I be wrong rather I be right

I stay up all night to get  it right

staying loose to keep it tight

a angel fell and got back up

a pen in my left in my right a red cup

half full so I had to fill it up

to the rim until it was running over

into the openness of obliqueness

sorry to say I have no weakness today

lasting longer like the bottomless

keep getting stronger the older I get

 I guess I'll die like this but until then

 no need of a kiss it bleeds my strength

take heed to this it's ain't wall if it ain't brick

it's just a tedious hideous hindrance

obstruction resistance in need of attention

pay it no mind get over it leave it behind

aren't you the one trying to find a peace of mind

here's a piece of mines and a half of yours

tare the pages into shreds cast it into flames

burn all of the names never speak them again

renounce it just one ounce of it may do you in

 

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RonnieL says:

Like the flow of this one!

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Lyrrix says:

Love this scribe

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