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WarriorCarryingWater
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The human race is a chase, the prey is our dreams.

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Floating cigarette butt

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Dreams extinguished like
Lucys once lit
Floating in toilets full of piss and s#!t
Broken, I'm floatin' in a nightmare that won't quit
Commodes hold us back like crabs clawing for preservation
Random d! € ks keep aiming, trying to piss me off then flush, to undermine my determination
But I keep treading this foul water cuz I don't belong in no f% $&€_% sewer
With the dead fish, phlegm, urine, and manure
So pick me up mother$=/ka, and flick me in the trash where I belong!

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Contest Winner  

WarriorCarryingWater says:

Thank you PoetryVibe! I am humbled and inspired to write more.
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The Immortal Wize says:

Outstanding, congratulations...well deserved.

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Woven says:

Extremely tactile imagery that grips the reader, as it should Congratulations!

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jlmoore2 says:

You capture the feeling many have today in America. Very descriptive, emotional and engaging!

 

RonnieL says:

congratz bruh...well deserved!

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WarriorCarryingWater says:

Thank you all very much!
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WarriorCarryingWater says:

@ jlmoore2 - Thanks Mom!

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