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The human race is a chase, the prey is our dreams.

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She's a Brickhouse!

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Women today are built differently,

Walking with my wife in the summer, I'm good typically,

But today at a park I saw a real life Brickhouse,

Stacked just like Lionel said, I can't believe what came out my mouth,

An earshot from her, my 5 year old daughter,and my wife,

Without thinking I yelled "Good night!"

She smiled, Keisha scowled, and Zoe looked perplexed,

"But its still daytime daddy, the sun hasn't even set!"

After taking a second look, my wife could see,

She nodded her head in respect to her and me!

As we walked away our eyes enjoyed something magnificent,

I've never seen someone so beautiful, she was exquisite,

I'll bet she'll never have to pay rent,

Mind was spinning,

What ever the game, this woman was winning!

If I ever cheated, 

whenever I beat it,

I will think of her,

If she were mean, stupid, or crazy,

Abused me, or had eight babies,

I don't think I'd care,

Respect to her man or woman,

I don't think that I could stand,

The attention that she'd command,

The energy that she would demand,

She's a brickhouse!

 

 

 

 

 

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SMusinga says:

I likes your poem very much!

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WarriorCarryingWater says:

Thanks Yuhi. I enjoy yours as well!

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