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Fm110comphodent
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Red Alert

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life

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To every species that evolve through wait,

Mankind has been trickled down to his fate,

The time he was soothe by the high degrees,

Watching his monitor for the one who bleeds,

All clans now have some type  of power,

Mankind backwoods planted in routers,

Disabling the young from menaces raptured doors,

Connecting the rivals along the wooden floors,

Women teaching girls who to expect,

Teachers molding costumes of dice effects,

Producing the wall of sound intuition,

Hoping the promise is the future remission,

It is the young adult who has to worry,

The middle age women who submit the quarry,

The coded military of dysfunctional bands,

And the God of the world signed as whole as man,

Red Alert languages scurry to convince,

People of color are jumping the fence.

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jtj1982 says:

OMG!!! THIS IS PHENOMENAL. I have always admired authors who have the ability to rhyme while maintaining the subject integrity. OUTSTANDING!!!
 

jtj1982 says:

OMG!!! THIS IS PHENOMENAL. I have always admired authors who have the ability to rhyme while maintaining the subject integrity. OUTSTANDING!!!
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WarriorCarryingWater says:

Nice flow
 

Woven says:

Loved how one line so easy flowed into the next, building upon this line of fire that was destined to be created. Fabulous expression!
 

RonnieL says:

I salute thee...OUTSTANDING WRITE!

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