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The human race is a chase, the prey is our dreams.

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It's A Trap! F*÷k The Cheese! (Ode to Admiral Ackbar)

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For the past few years,
I've been a cog turned by a dozen gears,
I've had trouble getting a loan,
Trouble renting my home,
Trouble buying a suit,
Constantly getting the boot,
Trouble getting a raise,
A mouse trapped in a maze,
Driven to succeed, searching for the cheese,
Never seeking an exit, only aiming to please, 
I worked extra hard, looked far and wide,
Until I finally found and ate my long sought after prize,
Moments later, I grabbed at my sides,
It was poisoned!  The wrath of my master's test,
Realized that I was born to lose, but hey, at least I did my best!
Screaming to the other mice, hope that they hear & believe,
It's a trap!  Run for your lives!  F%&k the cheese!

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Kenni_writes says:

I definitely know what you mean. I've experienced all of this. One day at a time...I guess. Nice write.
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WarriorCarryingWater says:

Thanks Kenni_writes!

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Poetunleashed says:

Nice flow

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Lyrrix says:

I felt this one!
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WarriorCarryingWater says:

Thanks Poetunleashed and Lyrrix!

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