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Mellow
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words you can find around confusion

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My dream so intense

Why do I know now what I sense

Am so confused but the other side could care less

Oh s**it they're both a mess

They playing on me,bored of chess

Still I board knowing this the chase had lured me to grace

No way this not no phase

I believed it wasnt an ending race

I intigured a face

11 times NOooo its laced

My mirror is displaced

Turnt upside down an image it displayed

So I read it how it read

But its so blurred on the head

I could never figure out the end

Too heavy so they said

My sight was catching this fade

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2b2b2 says:

TIGHT PIECE....Bravo...thanks for sharing....ONE
 

love_supreme says:

Excellent write.

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after vision says:

my poet, when we don't understand is when our mind, body and soul is recording the history of our world

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