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after vision
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when you ask a real man

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romance

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when you ask a male

sometimes you will get - tales

but if you want to know

ask the soul of one that had time to grow

 

ask the one that knows

what love is capable of

and i will strip down for you

and paint the pictue of love

 

a man can love

a man can be true

question arises

can he do it for you

 

yes, love can come and sit with you

Tickle the very core

Magic the magic

Fill you up, only to give you more

 

a real man ask

then helps to bring

what in you sleeps

to the place of - her ring

 

ask a real man

if love is in his plans

then read his eyes

as he holds your hand

 

after vision aka charles garner

 

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love_supreme says:

Excellent write. It hits the mark.
 

after vision says:

so true thanks LL

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Coalhouse says:

Great write brother!
 

LP45 says:

Awesome write aftervision! Loved the flow, dig the imagery. Definitely an enjoyable read. Thank you for sharing. Write on!

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lovelylady1 says:

My king, I enjoyed this pen. "magic the magic" really deep!
 

after vision says:

ms lady your love has been felt and distributed throughout my poetic heart

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after vision says:

lovely lady you are fast becoming a welcoming heart to the heart of my ink

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after vision says:

coal heart I tip my hat to ya

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