deeds
what if your deeds
came back to you
what if you were forced to feel
what you put me through
what if my pain
slid beneath your skin
would you still be asking me
if we can still be friends
what if your words
took on the sound of my voice
and i ended it with
"you give me no other choice"
what if your deeds
became your faith
could you handle the sh!t
that you put on others plate
charles garner aka after vision
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Join free Log inWarriorCarryingWater
That's profound, dope!
Read WarriorCarryingWater's poemsDubbleDhee
Deep sentiments. Always helps to see another's pain when viewing it through their eyes. Walk a mile in their shoes. Thx for sharing!
Read DubbleDhee's poemsmrmelody7
You know those truisms are sometimes so true your deeds good or bad will always follow you nice write
Read mrmelody7's poemslovelylady1
ouch! thought provoking my king!
Read lovelylady1's poemslove_supreme
This is a powerful what if. Excellent write.
Read love_supreme's poemsElvan
A very awakening piece. It make you ponder the what if of a relationship. Peace
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