Told me u loved me &
Ran with my heart
Undid my clothes I gave u the best part
Together forever u said we'll be
Honesty loyalty is what you promised me.
Hours later
Unanswered ??? Are bothering me
Rumble in the sheets was all u gave me
Took my soul & told me lies
Set me up for my own demise he was H.I.V+.
blakkbeauty
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TRUTH HURTS
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The Immortal Wize says: WOW! This is a deep, short stack...Welcome to the Vibe. |
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LP45 says: Wow is right! Very deep and sad. Thanks for sharing. |
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after vision says: my poet, I pray that it's just your pen flow and not the doctors note. I love the energy of this |
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hymnagen says: This piece pierced my soul. Powerful testimony! |
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blakkbeauty says: This is nor my real life story although a family member of mines it is, I like to write rather my poem pertains to my personal life or life in general theres a story in everything. |
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lovelylady1 says: My beloved, I feel your overwhelming desire for story telling from another's perspective. To be in tune with others emotions and be able to speak for them in the form of pen and paper. Love it babe girl! |
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blakkbeauty says: Thank u |
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Poetic08' says: Very powerful Queen Black beauty |
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TRUTH HURTSTold me u loved me & Ran with my heart Undid my clothes I gave u the best part Together forever u said we'll be Honesty loyalty is what you promised me. Hours later Unanswered ??? Are bothering me Rumble in the sheets was all u gave me Took my soul & told me lies Set me up for my own demise he was H.I.V+.  |
VOICELESSTaps mic, hello is this thing on??? Can anyone hear me, I'm seeing blank stares looking back at me as I stare into the crowd. I know they hear because me because I can hear myself, there's so much I have to say but how my message is delivered from me to you is what matters the most, I want you to feel my words like a blind person that touches brail to read, Feel my word like there apart of ancient history Feel my words like a man that caresses up & down a woman's spine, Feel my words like were going back in time, back to a time when your words held so much meaning and power, HELLO is this thing on??? Again blank stares, im like I know they hear me cause I can hear myself or is it that we close our ears and tune out the positive all the while allowing the negativity if this |