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THE MAIL ORDER BRIDE DISASTER Relationship Issues

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She lived in one country,

I in another, hanging on each word of love she'd utter.

Words wrapped in a money request

to be sent

at her dire behest!

 

I gave and gave

till I felt like a slave

yet kept on going

a blind man

ignorant in his towing.

 

Days turned into years

and years into more years

but I stood hopeful

they were merely stairs

leading to our betrothal.

 

Oh, how her photos teased and pleased!

I was captured by a future bride's ecstatic smile.

While all along

she was marching down 

a different aisle!

 

Now I'm left with just

a sackful of letters and photos,

her whereabouts unknown

and another bittersweet memory

for me to own!

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love_supreme says:

Wow, this is powerful. "A blind man ignorant in his towing." WOW
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The Immortal Wize says:

Damn!!!

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after vision says:

my poet as a military vet and a ex military police officer, everything points away

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after vision says:

my poet as a military vet and a ex military police officer, everything points away from the truth of the moment

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lovelylady1 says:

Hmmmmm...my king, my king! I've been theren ever sent money but, in hope for my "Happily ever after" I sent love. It came back rejected when i refused to buy a pre-paid card. SMHL

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