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Empty House:

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Remember when you said "I'd be nothing without you,

or I should be happy that I even found you?,

and how it would be hard to live my life without you,

Well now it's time to take a look around you....

Remember when I said "I'd always be up front and honest?,

I'd never lie to you I promised?, Well now is the time to pay you homage......

I thank you for all the bull you put me through, without it

I wouldn't have had this breakthrough.

I thank you for blaming me for all your wrong doing, right about now

an empty house is now what you are viewing.

I thank you for always putting me down, turning my beautiful smile,

the other way around, take a moment and look around, now tell me how do you feel now?.

I thank you for all your destructive words that were so potent,

I must admit your fake act of kindness in the beginning had me floating,

But as each day passed by my feelings went unnoticed,

everything  you did for me was done with deceitful motives.

Now that you stand in that empty house, tell me how does your ego feel now?

Are you mad at what you see? A women who will no longer accept defeat....

So your probably standing there with your hands on your head, completely confused by the situation you now find your self in.

You once told me, I couldn't make it without you, I know this to 

you may be true , a weak women is what your use to, 

But there you stand all alone in an empty house, no more words can form from your mouth, everything for you has went south, never will I ever again let this happen to me, because today I've walked straight on out.

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after vision says:

my poet, I share in the moment of truth when you say right here right now and leave with your head held high

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