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Your Ring

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Ladies don’t tell us

What he didn’t do for you

Don’t share so early

The things that we need to do for you

 

Do tell us that he never took you there

Because by nature we will focus on the sadness that you share

 

We will bring you the things

That you say that you never had

We’ll become the opposite

Of who made you sad

 

You will fall in love

With the shell of the man that your sadness built

The man that stands tall

With the aid of yours hearts stilts

 

Let us learn you

And show ourselves true

Force us to be ourselves

And do the things that our heart guides us to

 

Don’t give us the gun and tell us where to hunt

Let us smell your flower and nurture it to open

Make sure that our last chapter is closed

Before with us in your haste – another is open

 

Ladies we are hunters by nature

And prey on the slowest and weakest in the pack

Please don’t let us look at you – like that

 

Be the queen that you were born to be

Make us work for your love through love

Make us ask for and receive guidance

From the heavens above

 

Be the queen

And watch the king come out of a man

Be the queen

And watch the man build in his heart -- your ring

 

Charles garner  aka after vision

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mrmelody7 says:

Your work always reflect your username
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The Immortal Wize says:

This is a Gem!!!!
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WarriorCarryingWater says:

Real talk my poet!
 

kavindra says:

Love , Love !!!Love !!! this beautiful
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Lovelylady1 says:

A much needed Intel; thank you my dear king.
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EmpressRee says:

Love this share! Thank you King
 

after vision says:

thank you all for the show of love expressed my poets. it is much needed love from both side of the floor (male and Female) - we men have hearts just don't know when to reveal it

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icecole says:

#I can respect it.
 

love_supreme says:

Excellent write.

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