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DiamondTamaraC
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Fighting This War

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 I suit up for this battle

My declarations of non-appreciation are the reason for this war situation.

What once was a beautiful palace gracious empire called our home; Is now a horrid malefic war zone.

As much as I loved the good times, I cannot let it intervene with the tragedy I've been encountering.

To understand the difference of an "I love you" to "I want to control you". That every kiss on my forehead was just another bomb on the battlefield.

Someone I loved so dearly, close to me. Has me now sleeping with the enemy. In a short amount of time I embraced your flaws and kissed your battle scars. which lead to a longer road of excuses, covered up by the word Love.

Your hugs turned to grips that got tighter, and your voice got louder.

How much more would I allow myself to take until my life was at stake, for goodness sake, lonely nights I prayed. To have enough strength to leave you.

I had to let go

I loved you more than anything in this world, but you didn’t love me. You love the thought of controlling me. The thought of losing me was a thought of not being able to use me, not being able to abuse me mentally.

So, I'm ending this war.

Back to my base, and bringing peace back to my life

I'm done fighting this war.

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love_supreme says:

This is a powerful emotional write. Very well penned.

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The Immortal Wize says:

Aw, so much pain endured yet through it all, strength is found for independent deliverance to win the battle. Very powerful scribe. Much Respect and welcome to the Vibe.

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Poetic08' says:

Very powerful Queen Tamarac, it something we all been through.
 

Diamondtamarac says:

Thank you guys so much , I appreciate the feedback . Means a lot to me ❤️️

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Lovelylady1 says:

The war was won when she got up the strength to walk away from the "image" of what we all want... This subject, although not my experience, is my scream for ALL to hear. Thank you for being another voice my beloved.
 

after vision says:

my poet, this is how you work yourself out of a bad love affair and regain control

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WarriorCarryingWater says:

Nice write!
 

LP45 says:

Bravo!! The strength to leave a relationship like the one described here has to be nothing short of phenomenal. You've definitely captured that here my fellow poet. Thank you for sharing. Write on!
 

LP45 says:

Oh, and welcome to the vibe also.
 

TimChronicle says:

Yes been there! Very to the core expression. We know how to Love best when growing from battles! Wish to read more in the future

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