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Unguarded (Her) Pt 1

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romance

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Intense breaths and hollow sighs

You gazed upon me and questioned my desires

And through broken words and rapid heartbeats, I challenged your bluff

“You”

…the only sounds that managed to gasp onto my lips as my eyes pierced the center of your core.

“You”

I uttered again

…Daring your denial

Feeling the knot in my throat tighten

As if my words had fallen onto deafened ears

However it was…

You…

Whom I breathed…

Restlessly craved

Inexpressible and undeniable

It had always been you

 

And with no hesitation

I stripped my chest of its invulnerability and bared my truths

Only for you to find your face resting within

Solely then... did your eyes soften..

As did my breathing…

And with unrelenting strides,

I rushed towards your defiance..

Reading the fear plastered throughout the pages of your heart

…Yet my pace showed no signs of steadying

Nor my glare opted to relieve its penetration

I just couldn’t cease..

Until I held the pen that narrated our fates stories

For we had been told so falsely before...

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mrmelody7 says:

Again very nicely expressed, keep at it
 

LP45 says:

Good work. Thank you for sharing.
 

RonnieL says:

Expression of words and feelings....felt!

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alexiscoon4135 says:

Thank you all for your kind words and support. They mean so much!

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2b2b2 says:

Eloquent penning.....quite masterful and hypnotic....Write On...and thanks for sharing!

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Ezell-Dazh says:

Much agreed 2b2b2..Sublime flow

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after vision says:

my poet, you make me feel like a fly upon the wall where your ink is born

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Kingqadardwon' says:

Ooo wow! This is so beautifully written! Magical!! Thanks for sharing..

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