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after vision
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romance

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Can you bring me your heart

Can you sync up with mine

Can you get in rhythm

Feel my blood flow across your spine

 

Can you handle love

Unlike any you have ever had

Can you open your arms

To receive more than you could place into a bag

 

Can you come to me

Place your head upon my chest

Drop off your day

Let me embrace your peace – your rest

 

Look up to six foot three

And stand eye to eye

Kiss my lips

And make me high

 

Can you accept and love the fact

That I love and need you

Can you be patient

And let time catch up with us - two

 

Charles garner aka after vision

 

 

 

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mrmelody7 says:

Suave would be my one word to describe a lot of your writes this being one of it

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hymnagen says:

Though lately my words bubble from frustration with this nation, there abides below the heart of a romantic...I have no choice but to dig this smoothness, brotha. Well done

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after vision says:

mr melody my pen moves without consulting with my brain

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after vision says:

hymnagen, my brother, without effort I am free to let my heart be free

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RonnieL says:

Aye....feelin this piece. Transition of thoughts and words...Very Dope!

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4U

 

love_supreme says:

Very nice. Excellent write.

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BlueDichotomy says:

"Without effort I am free to let my heart be free" Whew Chile 🌑

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Ka

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