BlackHeart
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CATEGORY
romance
I
wonder if
you knew how
much I loved you
would you love me back
or would you kick me like a rock
in the street knowing the next one
is going to kick me harder and further too
and that will cause me to be
further away from you
and pretty soon
I will be
dust
When I could have been a BOULDER with you.
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COMMENTS
after vision says: so clear the message my poet, thanks for sharing and welcome aboard |
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RonnieL says: Very descriptive write....felt this piece. Keep expressing yourself. Welcome to Vibe! |
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LP45 says: Some folks just don't realize good when they have it. Great flow and imagery. Excellent work Blackheart. Keep the ink flowing. You're doing great. |
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BoulderI wonder if you knew how much I loved you would you love me back or would you kick me like a rock in the street knowing the next one is going to kick me harder and further too and that will cause me to be further away from you and pretty soon I will be dust When I could have been a BOULDER with you.  |
