This is the first time I've ever been in love and it's great, when on a few dates, stayed up talking late, and you listened when I told you about my rape, So understanding and kind with every word, every lie I ever heard, and every guy that broke my heart, I thank them because it wasn't stars, it wasn't cosmic, It was fake and it was plastic, but I scream in excitement, Good ridden to bad times I awaken the new with you, you hold my hair when I'm sick and you don't think with your, well we know what rhymes with, my love you spent time with it, patients you knew I had bags, you stayed and you carrying them, you're a flight that gives me jet lag, makes you that type where you consider marrying them.
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Mr. Right
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LP45 says: Great write and a great story. Happy endings are the best. Thank you for sharing and welcome to the vibe. |
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Mr. RightThis is the first time I've ever been in love and it's great, when on a few dates, stayed up talking late, and you listened when I told you about my rape, So understanding and kind with every word, every lie I ever heard, and every guy that broke my heart, I thank them because it wasn't stars, it wasn't cosmic, It was fake and it was plastic, but I scream in excitement, Good ridden to bad times I awaken the new with you, you hold my hair when I'm sick and you don't think with your, well we know what rhymes with, my love you spent time with it, patients you knew I had bags, you stayed and you carrying them, you're a flight that gives me jet lag, makes you that type where you consider marrying them.  |