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Crossed

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I can't concentrate long enough to escape

My consciousness makes it hard enough to hate

Crossroads of crossed paths

Crossed loves with lost laughs

Get off the gas, you driving too fast

This sh*t can't go on and it can't last

Step forward but leave the past in the past

Or let go and leave our paths as passed

Aquaintances to acquainted friends

Soul ties twisted at the end

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love_supreme says:

"Step forward but leave the past in the past" and the line right after it is fire. Excellent write.

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LP45 says:

Deep! Sometimes I feel I can read about different instances of situations that I've been through in my lifetime past and present. I guess you can call it art imitating life. Thank you tjaigreen, I appreciate the share.
 

RonnieL says:

Boom! Word play and flow...Standing O!

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tjaigreen says:

Thank you all for your feedback.

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