tiffanyr

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"Heartbreak Hotel"

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first love

Heartbreaks come and go like the Earth’s windflow

where the shattered heart lands no one knows

will it ever get repaired?

the question goes unanswered

lonely minds lost souls rebounding into a new relationship is a no no

promises of a new love a new story is in the sight of a new woman and man

a wedding band is the woman happy ending

,but the man doesn’t see the wedding in his plans

a getaway to an elegant hotel is what the woman thinks is what will set her lost emotions relaxed

so she books a room 216 is where her and her and her spouse luggage arrives

unlock the door drop her coat lay on the bed in a romantic moment her and her spouse have a intimate moment then sleep is what the woman did

well- rested next day

a note lay on the couch it read

“Dear Sasha,

I don’t love you

sorry to make it feel like I did

,but it was never true you and I knew

you was good that night ,but now I’m through”

From,

Max

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OTHER POEMS WRITTEN BY tiffanyr

"Daydream " (My Midnight Star"

Laying on my pillow of dreams I have an smile on my face that you placed there Jesus Closing the eyes you gave me I daydream upon heavenly blessings pouring down from the heavens that flows above me Your my midnight star even when I felt unloved from afar Clothed me underneath your spiritual blanket that glows with your halo Keep me warm with your embrace Take away the dark cloud with your height Let me flow down to an healthy elevation of your choice

"Ghost in the Wind"

You were once an presence in my reality Now your an spirit in my fantasy When I am alone in the residence we once shared I feel your breeze running pass my hair Yes, your here I'm aware I turn around and now your an ghost in the wind Now I have to reminisce holding your hand while dancing in the sand

" Separate In Air"

Pinch my cheeks years ago we had that high school puppy love what happened?

When I analyze the question all I get is silence

Eventually the love plane lost it's pilot and we are dropping consistently in altitude with no safety net

Now we are on the verge of total collapse

We both are crashing in emotions well, I am you packed your bags and moved on

You got your plane ticket and are off to an unknown destination where my stronghold can't detect your location

My soul ties is stuck in mid-air as I sit in the terminal replaying only good moments and deleting the hurt you did to me

future love? yea right I want the first two good months you were happy with me back ,but I have to cut the rope of the past back and let go on your flight to a new love a new story

Can I run and wrap my arms around you even though you will always back away? is what I tell God

Even though you left I'm still ...