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Kharisma
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Your Rose

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A rose withered in the rain. Smokey angles that became angels of the night. I grew from the root of dehumanization, yet you still plucked the thorns of my heartache. I became your pain, you grasped me tight to your heart and I became one with the veins that allowed you to breath. Didn't even have all my petals but the few I had you fertilized with the honey dew droppings of your soul. I drew out the life in you, but you still held on I was your rose. I was that hope that made you consciously aware that life was ugly yet so beautiful. You plucked me and groomed me, your rose that gave you the power that no other flower could.

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mrmelody7 says:

You have an refreshen approach to writing and a gifted talent for the usage of words such is the power of a Rose
 

minayaJ says:

Great usage of words...Nicely written

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Kharisma says:

Thank yall so much ❤

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hymnagen says:

Sometimes flowery language (pun intended) is so - for lack of a better word - corny. You, however, paint beautiful pictures with it. Thanks for sharing this.I you have the chance,read some of Poetry Vibe's own UnderHisWings7. I'd be shocked if you didn't love her work.

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Kharisma says:

Thank you so much I know I love your work

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RonnieL says:

Imagery of words...Flawless! Big fan of painting visions through words, and you captured it! Salute!

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