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Monday Morning Blues...

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Awoke this morning—gravel voiced;

Mars hued eyes—hopped a ride

on empty air: a locomotive delight.

Passed four—then seven

major stops; but did not.

 

Exited on a flatted three;

spent some time and then moved

onto a flatted seven.

 

Moaning, I gave out a holler to God.

He heard my cry and sang a blue note song

with me—crying too!

 

Man, there’s nothing

like singing the blues with God

on a Monday morning.

 

Can’t a brother get—a

two part ‘shout out’?

Or do you know

what I’m talking about?

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Jigen says:

Nice work your wording brings up unique imagery.
 

SYQ222 says:

I kbow what ya taking about!! Love it!!
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mlowe5 says:

Thanks, SYQ222. Peace and Love, mlowe5.
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mlowe5 says:

Thanks for the shout out, love_supreme. Peace and Love, mlowe5.

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ONE. Thanks. Peace and Love.

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