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DaSoulChild
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lightness in the dark
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Broken

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gasping, holding onto my chest 

feeling the pain, feeling the hard painful strain in my heart as it breaks. 

loving you for a year and a half 

the first who has healed my heart, took care of the wounds of a past love

only to be broken shattered to pieces like a glass fallen to the floor.

only to be said you say its over 

only to be said you moved on so quick 

only to be said you fallen in love with someone else

leaving me alone 

leaving me drowning in tears 

drowning myself 

wondering trying to figure out what did i do wrong

why...why

i thought you love me

all those moments we had

i guess its nothing now huh

guess i should respect you for telling me 

i'm hurt broken mad at you 

but i'ma have to move on and let u go

 

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The Immortal Wize says:

I know this hurt, humiliation and confusion so well, it's when you find the strength to let go, it can be so life changing. Well done!
 

RonnieL says:

Nice write, feelin this.

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