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life 1 min read 647 views Feb 1, 2017

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5 am all grumpy and lumpy bet not bump me in the hallway there's a dead rat stinking in the crawlspace standing in the crossway waiting for a Uber hope the drivers not killer don't feel much like dying to day it's too early I'm trying to say stay out of my way the mornings is not good until I say so right no it's so, so what's a bagel without cream cheese, please I rather nibble on some tree leaves every time I'm in the garden Eve comes to mind I don't know why I mean, who knows what she looked like my mummies not wrapped too tight the night ain't good until I say so so, don't say Goodnight it's 5 am

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mrmelody7

Always throwin down the enjoyable wit and rhyme

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Yes Yes...The story of some lives...People taken back to the lifestyle...Sound of applause.

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