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THE BAN: 5-7-5 THOUGHTS (Apropos Think on These Things)

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THE BAN: 5-7-5 THOUGHTS

(Apropos Think on These Things)

 

Immigrants—oh no!

Nor Native Americans;

we came as cargo.

 

The Ban.  Be aware;

they are back.  Look out.

They still do not care.

 

You may sigh and pause;

but remember their slicked ploy:

the grandfather clause.

 

You have a Passport;

but with the stroke of a pen,

that can be revoked.

 

This could be the end,

or could be the beginning:

depends on your kin.

 

Notice the ban list;

No European countries.

Africa not missed!

 

I just could be wrong

but remember history;

best to remain strong.

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The Immortal Wize says:

You should frame this one.

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social seer says:

So heavy I heard endless thunder. Fine work.
 

SYQ222 says:

That is on point!! Grandfathers clause. So smooth. Powerful Pen my friend. I will remain strong!!!!! Wisdom at it again lol...

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mlowe5 says:

Brother Wize Dom and social seer, much thanks for the read and generous feedback. Peace and Love, mlowe 5
 

LP45 says:

This was an awesome write mlowe5! Definitely on point and remarkably quilled. I was in haiku heaven while reading this. Thank you for sharing this. Peace.

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mlowe5 says:

Ladypoet45, thanks for the read and feedback. I am always appreciative to receive your comments. Peace and Love. mlowe5
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mlowe5 says:

social seer, thanks for the feedback. Know that it is much appreciated. Peace and Love, mlowe5
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mlowe5 says:

SYQ222, remain strong. thanks for the read. Peace and Love, mlowe5

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mlowe5 says:

Thanks, love_supreme. Much appreciated. Peace and Love, mlowe5.

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