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The Immortal Wize

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lightness in the dark
If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

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look at what you just did get out of town before  you get slid won't be long before you're found thrown in the back of a van bound no shoes no clothes aced out. Disrobed you're so cold you froze the life you chose the stakes are high can you split PI like they tried to separate the atom you're smart but not clever enough you made your bed you slept you wept you cried for help I ran to the bank drew out money came running you knew I would every time every dime now I'm broke you laugh as if it's a joke that's why I can't untie the ropes

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Kavindra says:

great write it bit scary it reads as if is a story imagery well placed in this piece

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