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Letting Go

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While your eyes are closed and mine are open ,i am feeling a breeze of acceptance to leave you . Im laying there next to you observing the way you breathe in and out as you sleep. Im loving the way you naturally grasp me, im in love with your apperance.But most of all i just want to be with you. Not because of this or because of that. Just simply because i genuinely have love for you. Im laying there next to you thinking and thinking and thinking.  I say to myself , this man is mine. we are broken up , but yet im still here and you haven't left yet. your actions are acting in such ways that i want better of . i look over at you once more ,then i tell myslef i am ready to let go. You will either come to me as a better person who wants to love me nonstop , or someone else will .      

 May god have his way , as i am finding strength to move foward. 

-Quanna Hudson

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poewhit says:

BIG self questions.
 

jkool86 says:

This is perfect. I have experienced when a woman's fed up, it comes to a man as a gift. You don't see it because it's wrapped and concealed. Her calm decision will reveal what she really feel.
 

ladiie87 says:

Tough decision to make most times

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kavindra says:

beautifully expressed there is always things to work on in a relationship when one stops the other works overtime and gets tired

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