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hitalot879
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a bit of prairie to seed that other earth I hold inside my mind

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Footsteps & Rose Petals

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life

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feet, hair, hands & waist
Each drop carelessly penetrates our
restless bodies and minds
Its capacity appears intense,
forcing a reluctant flash to brighten the sky
As the gentle thumps progress, our spirits are rising

Foot steps & Rose petals
This causes a pleasant warmness between us that can never be replaced...
Nothing else in this world can feel so right
Our arms chivalrously embrace like two souls
Fighting victoriously for your love
Now only shadows are identified in the surrounding flashes

Suddenly, caressing is misinterpreted by lustful advances
This chemistry soon becomes increasingly vivacious
Until one solemn word manifests from his lips
Instantly, the mood has vanished

Our wonderfully enhanced moment is lost,
leaving behind my emotions to slowly crumble inside.
faces, lips & hands
Hopefully someday soon I will understand ?

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The Immortal Wize says:

this is a very nice slice of poetry, enjoyable read.

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