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PASSION POEM#5: A DANCE OF UNDERSTANDING

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His hands on my hips...anxiety sets in,

My mind confused, I can't...it's not a good spot to be in...

Suddenly his soft voice whispers..."You're tense...Relax..."

I take a deep breath... slowly releasing the air.

"I will go slow, take my hand... don't be afraid to let me lead"

His voice echoed in my ear.

"You ready"

Softly I whispher.."Yes..."

"Hold on tight...1..2..3...Right....left...right...left..that's  it...

just move your body to match my speed..."

Hands held tightly together, we now move to the same rhythm,

 

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The Immortal Wize says:

Hot!!!

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street cries says:

Powerful

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mlowe5 says:

Sweet! Keep Dancing. The rhythms of life play on. Peace and Love, mlowe5

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Charles2 says:

Yes!... dance to life...

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jcf108 says:

Yin and Yang - beautiful!

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