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Do You Notice

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It's a certain demeanor he has, if you stare then you can see,
It's a certain swag he has, I notice when he walks towards me, 
That grown man look with them big ole arms, 
The kind I love to wrap around me and keep me from harm,
This fine piece of a specimen that god put on this earth,
Thank you Ms. Diane for giving birth, (LOL)
Something about him has changed, it's more confidence within,
More energy to defend the man within,
Weak to strong is such a easy transition,
You have to take notes when you play my position,
Catch the little things that twinkle in his eye,
Even wipe the tear that may fall from inside,
You have to pay attention cause your never know,
Its a hard shell to crack, but we must if we want it to grow,
Sometimes overwhelming and often underestimated,
But never uneducated, sort of sophisticated,
Finding his way through this maze of life,
Which at the moment won't suffice,
That look of worry he tries to hide,
For he may seem like a baby crying inside,
A baby cub within a lions world, 
Oh don't let him fool you cause you can catch this swirl,
More like a lion that is misunderstood,
With a menacing ROAR, your run if you could.
Stick around and his roar becomes a bark,
That lights my fire and makes my heart spark,
This wild lion is just a precious creature,
Not trying to be the focus just making a feature,
Going off instinct to try to survive,
But with patience cause he is on his time,
Do you notice this in the man I'm describing to you?
You should notice because I am describing you.  

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LP45 says:

Awesome write reesiecupp. Great flow and imagery. Thank you for sharing this. Keep writing and if you're new here, welcome to the vibe.

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