The Immortal Wize

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are you awake coz I can't sleep

I try to think less about you

my thoughts want let me out you

even if I tried I couldn't doubt you

it's like hell trying to live without you

I have friends but friends come and go

truth is true friends pass away too low

waking up telling myself to let you go

I want to tho I may be soft spoken

before you go I have to let you know

telling myself didn't I tell you so

not much to life but sitting through funerals

it was hard to cry through the hurricane

couldn't take no more rain on the plane

flights canceled couldn't go on the plane

wishing I had wings or at lease fins to swim

through all the dark matter in my brain

on a lot of stuff can't feel no pain

eyes wide open spotting trains

shrouded in the hood seeing things

not so good you wouldn't come back

even if you could manage to do that

these times are for envying the dead

you went out in a bang before you could

take a swing this curse is a cancerous disease

causing enough pain to bring a quarterback

down to his knees we have to get up

we can't stay down there

stay up here where there's fresh air

this is what I do, think about you

like what would you do if you

were still here and I was gone

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		LP45 says: Wow, great write Wize Dom. I can feel the imagery in this write. Thank you for sharing this. poems by this commentor Lost and Found Friendology In Our World
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		JustOneStoryTeller says: Wow, this was nice made me think of all the thoughts and feelings people had durning the hurricanes leaving flying to other places leaving people and everything behind. The imagery was nice! poems by this commentor Free At Last Black Expressions Black Expressions

OTHER POEMS WRITTEN BY The Immortal Wize

It's Gone Hurt (01102025)

some of these people have paintings hanging on the walls that cost more than the house that's on fire millions of dollars worth of jewels mink stoles furs gone up in smoke some of these people who always had everything will know what it's like to lose everything do you know what it's like to lose everything? I do for me it's just a step off the curve some of these people gone be jumping out of highrises and leaping off tall buildings in a single bound going from filthy rich to dirt poor it's sad yes it's sad to see these people reduced to zero it's also sad to see Skid Row

Sick (0192025)

sick people will make you sick if you're not already sick if you're already sick you probably got sick from somebody sick who made you sick now you sick making somebody else sick now everybody you come in contact with gets sick of you and you get sick of them I'm sick of you, you sick of me I make you sick you make me sick , sick people make everybody sick

Close Call (0182025)

there are those who came before you that came after you there are those who came after you who did not succeed at what they came to do...they came to destroy you

I'm The Blip (162025)

something is broken and I can't fix it and I can't get in touch with those who can but I can't give up on it I have to keep on working with it because it's worth all the energy I put into it when it was functioning at full capacity working as expected at a maximum level of productivity efficiently as possible without any limitations helping me to reach the highest possible level ofperformance as long as it comes on when I push the power button I can manage to get around the glitch when in pursuit to meet a goal I'm relentless resilient and determine to see it through to carry on to the next beat

Sky (162025)

when I see stars in the sky I think about all the things that dominate the sky but those things have no dominion over the sky nothing can touch a single cluster in the sky

"I wonder why "

Quick Witted

every time I hear someone say "it's the end of the world" I get excited not because I'm suicidal I get excited because I been hearing about this event for so long like we been lied to for so long I heard that "God don't make mistakes" I mean if God made mistakes God would have to erase us off the face of Earth so be it and it shall be done and all that bible talk I'm at the point of my life where it's do or die I'm gone do all I can before I die or God decide to wipe us out

Concoction

they told us what happened they showed us what happened now their trying to convince us it happened the current event is not new development the evidence is irrelevant ain't nothing to see here other than a elephant jump over the fence and a cow jump over the moon

Broken People Do Great Things (142025)

The "broken crayon theory" is a metaphor that unlocks and opens a door to many more a broken hammer can still drive a nail a suitcase with a broken handle can still be carried a broken heart still beats like a drum a broken pencil still can be sharpened like a broken crayon still colors there's no deeper place than a wounded place where scars are born and cannot be erased like the tears we wipe away so we can say "I'm not crying" but sometimes the tracks give us away functioning through dysfunction is everyday life for some more than likely for most one can be split into pieces but still manage to exist applied pressure is what breaks us it's the SNAP! that wakes us UP!

That Away (142025)

sometimes I feel as though I'm heading in the wrong direction I could turn around but curious about where it will lead me when I get there I find out I'm exactly where I'm supposed to be, going the wrong way to get there is what lead me here it feel that way sometime

The Third Stage (142025)

in nineteen eighty, twenty twenty five seemed to be far away now that I've arrived it seems like it didn't take that long or did I unintentionally doze off during the ride