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The Immortal Wize

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lightness in the dark
If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

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Too Long Waiting

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I did'nt mean to let the sun go down

with you mad at me, I didn't know you were

going toward the sky, when you get your wings

I was wondering if you would teach me how to fly

I don't know what got into me that day

I don't know why I did not tell you to stay

I don't know what got into me that day

I've been calling on angels hoping you would come

I just want to see you once more

I would do just about anything to hear you

knocking on my door, feelig like you knew

all along why didn't you tell me you were going home

 

 

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mrmelody7 says:

Add some music repeat a couple of stanzas you got a number one song

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