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The Immortal Wize

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lightness in the dark
If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

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Fish Flakes

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let's say the worls is an ocean

we all would be born swimming

strangely some of us would

die by drowning

some of us would just

drink too much

some of us would be

found belly up

some of us would reside

in castles

some in sunken ships

others on the rocks

some of us may get caught

some on hooks others

in a net

some might get thrown back

what they saw up there

"it's another world with

big strange looking creatures

testifying what they have

witnessed

told that they're lying

there's nothing up there

outside of this

because you're just a fish

but what's the difference

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2b2b2 says:

All in the stroke, me believes....Write, Swim, Live On! ONE
 

LP45 says:

This is definitely an enjoyable read wize dom, A true reflection of how society has become and their relentless efforts to keep folk down. Thank you for sharing this.

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