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Did I write out my life

 

Did I write my future unknowingly 

Putting it on paper and it turned out to be true

How could I have known to write more of a positive outlook

When most if not all my surroundings was just the opposite 

 

A past dealt growing in the hood

Being told 2nd best was my could

Looking back at what I've accomplished 

All while experiencing anguish and discomfort 

 

Could I have not worn the horrors of disappointments always wanting to flee

What could I have written differently 

Lived a life fragmented and empty

Traveled the world did I covet all that I've seen and done 

Left now hopeless and spirit depleted to none

 

Did I allow all the opportunities that came my way

To go unnoticed and the soft whispers I disobeyed 

When I'm gone will stories tell what I was known for

Whether stories of great values or lessor

 

Will there be anybody to tell my story

Concerning the things I did that were worthy

Or will I be forgotten not acknowledged at all

Only because the things I did was insignificant too small

 

Why didn't I do as Paul forgetting what was behind and dwell on a future 

Yet I held onto my past and a future filled with questions unanswered 

When did I write being always in need

And not sharing gratitude by saying thank you GOD please 

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mrmelody7 says:

Your writings will record your legacy as you press on
 

Blessme520 says:

I pray. Thank you.

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