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Julius170
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What you want to know I like you, I feel like we would vibe together, Maybe that’s just me, What Can I say, I’m a mix kid, Who made it out the hood, I’m just trying to do something with my life, So I decided to go to college, I wanna become a detective in homicide, I also wanna be a math teacher, So idk, Back to being a mix kid, I’m Puerto Rican and Africa America, I’m 5’8, Living everyday with a smile on my face, I hope that’s good enough, I’m a deep soul, You will soon realize, I can keep going but I’ll give you a break.

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giving up time

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I could feel it,

Time to time,

I still think about it,

I close my eye and I could see about it,

She is the poison to my dream,

The pain to my heart,

I been through worst,

I could feel it gone,

The last thing I wanted,

Was to lose her,

She was the major key to my happiness,

The lock to my key,

Now she a shadow of a memory,

And the tear to my sorrows,

I still love her,

I feel it everyday,

that will never change,

I know where she stands,

I know what I must do,

Least I think I do,

Letting go was never easy,

giving up was always hard,

stepping back took time,

I took my time to breath, 

to heal,

Giving her time to recognize what she truly feel,

Maybe that was smart, 

Maybe it’s wasn’t,

Maybe I don’t know what i want,

All I know is that I wanna feel,

How I felt when I was with her,

I hate giving up the times,

I believe in god,

I believe in time,

I believe time heals all,

I just got to be patient and do me. 

 

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love_supreme says:

Excellent write.
 

GeminiAura says:

Nicely written, sometimes, giving up is one of the hardest things you ever have to do, especially when u feel it’s meant to be

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