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The Immortal Wize

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lightness in the dark
If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

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Eaten Eden

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 disobedience was not the first sin
it had to be curiosity the audacity
to touch the untouchable
forbidden delectable
morsels diabolically
led to try, surely you
will not die just wake up
on the other side of the fence
after being convinced
the fruit is ripe for the picking
it's something rotten about
the apple and the figs not
too appealing
want not
touch not
taste not
is not enough
to stop sinning

 

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