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Exodus Children And The Drfeam

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Though time tested

and weary worn,

we remain steadfast

in the perilous journey.

You cannot beat us down

with you scorn;

Nor destroy us with hate

and abject illegality.

In the hour of darkness

and the gloom of day,

The struggle will continue

and shall never cease.

Liberation is a process that allows

nothing to get in its way.

The table has turned; the shorn

no longer fears the beast.

The story has already been told;

we’re children of the Exodus:

Over the desert and across the sea floor,

our feet have gone.

There is nothing in your narrow-mindedness

that can stop us;

No shootings or bombings can prevent

the dream reaching home.

Many beautiful lives we have lost;

but not our sacred hope.

And what once was despair,

is now just a simple footnote.

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love_supreme says:

Excellent write.

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mlowe5 says:

latin_lover, thanks for the read and time taken to offer feedback. Much apreciated. Peace and Love, mlowe5.
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tjaigreen says:

Love this! Thanks for sharing.

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2b2b2 says:

Outstanding...Bravo...thanks much for sharing your distinctive pen!!! ONE
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mlowe5 says:

tjaigreen, thanks for the read and feedback. I am much appreciated for the time taken to do read and do so. Peace and Love, mlowe5
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mlowe5 says:

2b2b2, Thanks for continuing to be an inspiring poet. As already shared, I continue to be humbled and honored to receive your feedback. I have no doubt that other fellow poets feel the same way. Peace and Love, mlowe5
 

Brownchildt says:

I must say.. i always enjoy your work.. Nice word play thank you for sharing
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mlowe5 says:

Brownchildt, thanks again for the read and feedback. May you continue to be the "budding" young poet that you are. Peace and love, mlowe5.
 

DallasCowgirl says:

Jeremiah 31:16 Penetrating and profound piece! Honors!

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mlowe5 says:

underhiswings7, thanks for the read and captured feedback. Indeed, you and the children of today are the essence of what is finalized in Jeremiah 31:16-17..."([y]our children shall come back to their own border." Peace and Love, mlowe5.
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Charles2 says:

Profound ...depth . ..charged message hits hard, precise...

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mlowe5 says:

Thanks, C2. Wrote this back in 2018. Pleased that it remains as profound and charged today. Peace and Love, M. Lowe
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mlowe5 says:

Many, many thanks, love_supreme, for this write as well as for the SNAPS given to "On The Trestleboard of Time", "Testing Storms of Faith", and "there's no alibi." Peace and Love.

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