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Alive Women and Dead Men

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Queen you won't grow because you only deal with Dead men!

 How can a dead man reap the rewards of the living?!

Why would you let him take you to a shallow grave?

Stains all of shame written all over the place , remnants of permanent teardrops left on the cheeks of your face that are so hard to erase.

You're Too beautiful for that, he took your mind, what a terrible thing to waste.

He was your slave and task master, just tossing and pouring your feelings all over the lake.

Baby girl, he just wanted your flesh and only says that your @$$ is fatter because he enjoys the pleasure.

Told the same exact thing to the other girl, just a few nights later, to his count he can add her.

Can the dead teach the living?!

The Man was supposed to be the teacher from the beginning, blamed you for all of his short comings and then called you the Sinner.

Do you remember that summer, spring, fall and winter when he left you winless, loss after loss all of your friends can bear witness!

You were supposed to move on but you didn't like Living, you were attracted to and fell in love with a dead man, now at you funeral we just pay you a visit.

~Qadar Dwon'

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Lyricalarsonist says:

Yes.....love the vibe...love the flow.

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Kingqadardwon' says:

Thank you! I appreciate your feedback.. 1 love
 

LP45 says:

A very powerful truth written with a very powerful pen. I even felt a tremor with the period at the end. Thank you for sharing this KQD.
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Kingqadardwon' says:

@Ladypoet45 Thank you.. I truly appreciate you.. I'm always honored by receiving your feedback.. Definitely humbled.. Great to be blessed by master poet.

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