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More Bars than a Prison

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Bar for bar/word for word, noun for noun/ verb for verb/ food for thought, intelligent d'oeuvres ,they stealing my slang and biting my slurs, had to go to the library of Congress to copyright my work.

 They pitching ,

I'm batting curves,

homerun king, loaded bases,

I'm such a blur

My Dopeness causing a stir, sit back and learn, war of words, watch the lyrical flair, all is fair, my pheromones are in the air

Straight G sh!t, as in genius, I'm always relevant and convenient, always on time, you're always late so you never even seen me.

Never heard before rhymes, I'm unique, guess you can say one of a kind, mind sitting right, your girl smile I put it there, she read one of my post and poems the other night, it turned her frown upside down, looking and feeling like a Queen again, you had her feeling like hommie the clown.

Wasn't at all  trying to entice, but she said I'm nice, real dope, straight raw, sharp cut, compared you to a butter knife , straight poodle no bite, ima pit so I fight all negativity,one conversation with me and it'll change your life.

Ima poet not a rapper, rappers tell lies in all of their Rhymes, poets tell the truth in all of their lines, you're on a horizontal plane, I'm a get back up vertical stand up kind of guy.

Heart big and humble, your falsehood and deceit is as big as dumbo I'm the absolute truth so I serve good gumbo, you still serving chittlings and a luncheon meat combo.

You're killing people, feeding them poisons, I'm passing out magic potions, more potent than Jesus blood on that altar, I'm the truth, the way and the light, 100 years from now I'll probably be on a altar, not because I'm perfect but probably because I'm an author

The author of what's really real, always express how I feel, it's nothing for me to drop a freestyle, the mind is really free over here.

Cheers to the ones who live without fear, everything is doable and obtainable, just agree with your inner wheel, that's another word for Aura, sorry if I lost ya, you have your own space ship within, so let your light beam on em.

I got More bars than a prison but they wasn't listening, even if they let you out, you're still incarcerated and a slave to your own thinking, sometimes you don't be thinking , just doing the same ol things and expecting something different,

that's insanity my man

link up with me

lets build

I got a plan

can't change the world with inmates you have to know you're a divine man.

Intelligent men by design, I'm trying to free your mind, you don't need to do a lot of years, you just need to be wise with your time.

Intelligence breaks the bars of mental and physical stagnancy, that's the only way to become free, now drop your Rhymes and compete, and if it isn't this deep, you must accept your L, enroll and become a student and allow me to teach

and reach the masses without you wasting your foolish ink and never in your life disrupt a master poet who's always capable of delivering a masterpiece.

Yeah that's some thought provoking heat, I do have to end this so that I can post and release so that the public can judge and see, I'm really not finished, truly gifted with the wordplay, Allah really blessed my speech, sneak peek behind my bars, pay attention when I speak, might miss a jewel, or gain some strength if you're weak.

 

King Qadar Dwon'

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The Immortal Wize says:

Respect!!! King

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WarriorCarryingWater says:

Dope!
 

Brownchildt says:

Love your word play.. Thank you for sharing..

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2b2b2 says:

FANTASTIC, PHENOMENAL FLOW....(I'm still grinning....love this brah......)ONE
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mlowe5 says:

Yes indeed KingQadarDwon! They need to know that the Master Poet is master of Himself and his Pen...A poetic Griot of truths..."Word for Word". My Brother, may The Most High continue to impregnate the womb of your fertile, poetic mind. Peace, Love and Familyhood, mlowe5.
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Kingqadardwon' says:

I'm truly honored and humbled to receive feedback on my work from the best poets on this planet. Bar for bar word for word, poetry vibe have the best poets in the world...Sending a special Thank you to all you brilliant poets.

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