Therealchoc98
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life
I want to live
I wanna live like no one is watching
like I'm running through the finish line but I'm not stopping
Can I live?
because its like we're just living to die
while time flies upon the sky
But
I
just want the best
for me and the rest
never been a hater
trust me I'm not a fret
But,
I still live
I'm not a begger
I give.
searching through my thoughts
the only way is positive.
In the end through it all,
I still live!!
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TamaraD says: GOOD ONE I CAN RELATE THANKS FOR SHARING....BLESSINGS TO U |
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2b2b2 says: Uplifting Share...thank you..... |
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hitalot879 says: First off you have used a great deal of grammar that is simplistic to taste. I liked the flow. Further, you have grown in your work as an artist type poet. Really liking your work. Words of nicely woven linguistic terms. Fashioned in a great experience type work you got here. Try reaching out to your fan base it may surprise you. Even you who may think otherwise. This piece is wonderful in its presentation. Lastly, subjects change and there maybe a pattern to this equation. Mark the one willing to let go |
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Therealchoc98 says: Thank you all very much. I appreciate your uplifting words. |
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LiveI want to live I wanna live like no one is watching like I'm running through the finish line but I'm not stopping Can I live? because its like we're just living to die while time flies upon the sky But I just want the best for me and the rest never been a hater trust me I'm not a fret But, I still live I'm not a begger I give. searching through my thoughts the only way is positive. In the end through it all, I still live!!  |
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