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Things I should have said

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romance

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I'm sorry if it seems like I'm playing with your emotions.

I've never felt this way about anyone.

I think about you all the time and I want to build a future with you.

I'm only slowing things down because I feel like I love you more than you love me.

I understand that you are shy but you should trust me enough to be yourself.

But you have to understand how scary this is for me too

I'm willing to uproot my life but I'll only do it if you're serious about me.

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hitalot879 says:

First, you have eyes to see very great and potentially fantastic poetry. This remarkable piece really makes you think a bit. Further, as if a sculpture would create a piece. Your remedy is in check with thoughts provoking premise intact. I was drifting halfway down maybe that's just me ? I picked up the pieces and really valued this exquisite piece. Lastly, overall i don't see and flaws but rather enjoyed the meaning of this grand poetic endeavor. You hit the ball out of the park with this one. Thank you kindly, Poet Mario William Vitale

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WarriorCarryingWater says:

Nice flow!

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