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The Immortal Wize

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lightness in the dark
If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

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you say you're sorry but I'm still PIST steady lying about being over it trying everything to clean this stain that lingers on and still remains I keep hearing a voice saying "LIFE IS TOO SHORT" but I still have this broken heart BEATING unsightly blemishes things in my head left unsaid and unfinished business too many loose threads and openness grave wounds without stitches YOU BLEED ON ME I BLEED ON YOU we're losing too much blood between us two I'm weak so are you drained an numb to the pain close my ears to what you're saying mama screams WE NEED GET OVER IT I love mama but she don't pay my rent she can't tell me what to do if she knew, I wouldn't be going through this I keep hearing a voice say "LIFE IS TOO SHORT" but I still have a broken heart BLEEDING we don't think the same inside our brains something's wrong you're a Taurus I'm a Leo we're too headstrong I tell these notebooks things I can't reveal like the number of pills I've had to refill in order to function from this dysfunctional behavior you say you're sorry but I'm still PIST

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love_supreme says:

this a real poem. Loved it.

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Xclusive says:

Nice word play and emphasis on each stanza. Keep the ink flowing!

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