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lightness in the dark
If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

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Jack's & Jill's

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problems found

  see what had happen was

she met met him online
looking for love
 
she never mind a few
    pushes and shoves

she  needed hugs
 wanting to fall in love

  So the story goes
 
she has a man who beats on her
  a man who's blood is cold

his has eyes as black as coal
  he's heartless ain't got no soul

he comes home at night
  and loses control

there's fire down in his soul
  he has a disease that's physical

a legion occupying his mental
  she knows he's dysfunctional

she's broken too she can't let go
   so she leaves but she never goes

he's no stranger  to bars backseats
  of police cars her tattoos hide scars

when he goes too far he turns up the
  stereo so the neighbors won't know

she screams until you hear no more
    something blunt hits the floor

you see him but she's no more
  she could have seen him coming

up the hill checked his
   temperature and  pedigree

before the meet and greet
 isn't that what googling's for

 

 

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