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MissEricaChanel
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It's funny how I"m a down a** chick

But when it's time reciprocrate I get the short end of the stick

I'm loyal as hell and you'll never have to question me

But as soon as I want you to do something

All of a sudden I do too much "bickering"

If you're not in control you'll have a panic attack

But the moment I act like you, you want me to fall back

Sometimes I feel like you lack respect for me

But if I'm feeling that way it's because that's what you've shown me

Because when you love someone it's just some sh*t you don't put them through

When a woman has given her all and doesn't ask for much

How do you turn around and dog her than claim that you love her?

You've betrayed my trust more than once yet I stood by you

I asked you to do one thing and yet you still just couldn't do.

At this point I just feel like you are draining my soul

Because everything you say goes and my voice doesn't exist in this relationship that is supposed to feed my soul.

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love_supreme says:

Excellent write.

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The Immortal Wize says:

This jewel is EXELLENT, SPECTACULAR and EXSTORDINARY! strong powerful vent.
 

Xclusive says:

I can feel the passion in this write. No Queen should have to go thru this. Keep the ink flowing!

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LP45 says:

I like your writing style MissErica, I can definitely relate to this type of situation. It reminds me of my piece entitled "Sacrificial Love". Thanks for sharing and keep writing!

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