The Immortal Wize  | Poetry Vibe
The Immortal Wize

PRO MEMBER

This poet practices good karma and posts comments 460100
contest winner 16
contest winner
lightness in the dark
If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

Site Rank

DIAMOND

  4 star general
Total poems   3461
Lifetime Views   890674
Total poems - 7 days   5
Total poems - 30 days   26
Total poems - 90 days   76
Total poems - 365 days   230
you need to login or register to leave a comment

Intoxicating

CATEGORY

life

Poetry Vibe Mayor

MAYOR of Poetry Vibe. This poet is identified as the mayor of the Vibe for have the most karma ponts. You receive karma points when you comment on poems.

Views: 291
standing in a piss soaked breezeway of a bodega over by the railways drinking a Snapple nibbling on a pickle looked up there she goes and here she comes a few minutes later we were standing face to face I couldn't resist her penetrated gaze the allurement of those big beautiful irises a hint of rose tickled the tip of my senses couldn't think of nothing except curling her toes she wore a flavor kind of fragrance I loved it sparked curiosity inside of me suddenly I had a need to know what spelled so lusciously she turned and blushed at me then said it's Chloe suddenly something threw me I had a ex who wore Chloe too adjusting my optical shifting to the obstacle it was no longer optional the need to know more was off the table chunked my bag in the trash suddenly I was ready to go noticing my sudden disinterest she asked me what's the matter why you change the subject I said nothing it's not you it's the aroma I'm drawn to hooked on a smell I used to love to wake up to be next to make love to that's why I'm so attracted to you you remind me of someone else I wish I never met had to change my mind in order to forget I guess I better check myself in the mirror looking for a spot for proof where she chopped off one of my roots it's hard to believe 8 years later still under a spell of an angel who put me through pure hell why am I feeling this way it's such a beautiful day it's been so long without a picture I cant see the face couldn't tell you if she's dead or alive but the spirits so strong it's hard to deny the degrees of separation it was a bad situation an influx's of frustration she once was number one in my book I thought she was the best thing that ever happened to me it's true I'm not lying I'm not singing laughing to myself but felt like crying it's like some kind of high came over me got me outside paranoid swaying from side to side thinking my ex done put a hex on me

You must be registered to leave a comment. Registration is FREE.

Register

COMMENTS

 

Tali says:

Love and pain, brilliant capture!

poems by this commentor


login below

Forgot your username?