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hitalot879
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a bit of prairie to seed that other earth I hold inside my mind

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Surrender Me...

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Surrender me by way through the barren leaves

beneath the sod my breath doth trod

tempers of fire

Surrender me

 

stand ovation to its plain creation

tempered with fire blown up in its fullest of desire

bury me deep

the deaf will hear the blind shall see

 

Surrender me below this earthly plain

a hero may go insane

fan the flame

in this computerized age hysteria

 

I'm one in want to succeed

gradually below the breeze

a comic mind with a temptress lead

commonly

 

I felt a funeral in my brain

let me be the first to explain

tiny robotic men were dancing in my dream

as if some evil fiend

 

connect me to wisdom beyond all ages

salute the flag of honesty

as he sits in his ivory tower

let us pretend to build the sorrow

 

tomorrow the sun shall rise to meet each day

Surrender me though fondly deep inside of me

Surprise the lonely

all others are as busy as a bee

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LP45 says:

Nice write hitalot, thanks for sharing.

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