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The Immortal Wize

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lightness in the dark
If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

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you reached out in pain so long ago I could see it in your eyes you wanted to die I wonder are you still alive hoping you didn't succumb to circumstances taking your own life don't know why but I have the need to know I guess because I stood by helplessly not knowing what to do a rich vocabulary but didn't know what to say I could think of a million things now but now's probably too late I do completely relate to your plight being that I have my own demons to fight I can't say I don't know why people want to die to live is a try some say it's a sin to do yourself in but what bible is that in meaning I don't know that to be a fact still there's a suicide movement on the rise a rich man poor man fatality I guess we can only hope love shines a light on the subject so we can see where we are going instead of falling still I wonder are you still alive

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LP45 says:

Great write Wize.
 

Brownchildt says:

This piece is enlightening thank you for sharing

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